Thursday, August 25, 2011

Double Journal Entry #1

Quote: "After studying the matter, Ms. Davidson concluded, 'Online blogs directed at peers exhibit fewer typographical and factual errors, less plagiarism, and generally better, more elegant and persuasive prose than classroom assignments by the same writers.' "

Reaction: This quote to me was very interesting because it shows that students care more about their posts on the Internet than their school reports. I say they care more because with less error one could only assume they care more about this than the other. The reason for this is most likely due to the fact that everyone can see a post on the Internet. If a person decides to make a post on the Internet they would want the millions of people reading to perceive them as intelligent rather than some ignorant buffoon babbling on the Internet. This would mean that one must go to great lengths to make their spelling, sentence structure, and information all come together to form an intelligent response to whatever they are posting about.

Citation: Hefferner, V. (n.d.). Education Needs a Digital-Age Upgrade - NYTimes.com. Opinion - Opinionator - NYTimes.com. Retrieved August 30, 2011, from http://opinionator.blogs.nytimes.com/2011/08/07/education-needs-a-digital-age-upgrade/?hp

Extra Material: http://chronicle.com/article/Studies-Explore-Whether-the/44476/
This article describes how the internet makes students better writers.

Citation: Keller, J. (n.d.). Studies Explore Whether the Internet Makes Students Better Writers - Faculty - The Chronicle of Higher Education. Home - The Chronicle of Higher Education. Retrieved August 30, 2011, from http://chronicle.com/article/Studies-Explore-Whether-the/44476/

4 comments:

  1. The section that you chose to quote is definitely true. I have witnessed better persuasive writing, less grammatical errors and less plagiarism in my fifth grade classes. I like the theme of your blog!

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  2. Sean,
    The author for Education Needs a Digital Upgrade is Virginia Hefferner. When using bibme or another citation, make sure you check for the correct author.

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  3. Hi Sean,
    You need to find a related resource to the article, Education Needs a Digital Upgrade, it can be a video, article, website, etc... See week one for example. Post this related resource.
    Thanks!

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  4. I agree that one of the reasons students do better work in a blog format is because they might feel embarrassed if their fellow classmates read their blog and find errors. I also think that since (most) students are comfortable with online communication, they might feel less stress than if they were writing a formal essay.

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